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Industry 첨삭 부탁드립니다

오픽언제탈출해 | 조회 69 | 추천 0
  • 2023.01.25
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1. Tell me about one industry in your country that is well known

 

When I heard of your question. Aeronautical industry comes up to me first. I’m intrested in the area because I want to work for the industry oneday. So, I’ll explain about it.

 

First of all, Aeronautical industry is one of the fastest growing industries in my country. According to some news, Aeronatuical industry has a very promising future because of the geopolitical location of Korea. People around the world will travel to other countries through the Korea located in the middle of the Asia. That’s why a bunch of Airlines have opened these days. You know what? It only takes less than 2 hours to get to Japan or China from Korea by airplane.

 

Second, The average salary of Aeronatical industry is higher than other industries. Because of that, Many people of Korea started to be interested in the area. Unfortunately, Covid-19 made the industry get worse for a while. The industry has recoveried from the Covid-19 quickly. Futhermore, UAM(Urban Air Mobility) has a great influence on the aeronatical industry. I believe that our life will have changed greatly thanks to the industry.

 

Overall, Aeronatical industry has a great future and many people want to work for the area these days.

 

 

2. Can you tell me about an industry that you follow? how has it changed since then?

 

Like I mentioned, Aeronatical industy is the promising area and many people want to work for the area. Moreover, there are many changes compared to the past. Let me tell you about it.

 

In the past, There were few airlines in Korea. In other words, There were only 2 airlines, Korea Air, Asiana Air. What’s worse, The average prices of the airplane ticket was so expensive. Nevertherless, We had no choice but to take these airlines due to the reason. That’s why most people prefered a domestic travel to a overseas travel, back then.

 

But now, According to the development of Aeronautical industry, Bunch of Airlines has opened and there are twelve airlines now. In other words, We have a lot of choices with reasonable prices of airplane ticket. Moreover, I can easily make a reservation on a phone ahead of time comparing different airlines in real time. If I want to have a meal in Japan for my free time, I just book a airplane ticket using my apps.

 

All in all, Many airlines have run compared to the past. It can lead us to get a ticket at a resonable price and to use easily through the apps on a phone.

 


3. What kind of efforts have you made for your career in the past?

 

Like I mentioned earlier, I want to work for the aeronatical industry oneday. And I do various efforts for my goal. Let me share the things that I try to do

 

First, I have studied for English hard. Because Having a good English profiency skill is pretty important to communicate each other as a global language. Given the charateristic of aeronatical industry, I would work with many workers from other countires. It means that I would make a trouble if i miscommunicate with co-workers. That’s why I’am getting a this Opic Test

 

Second, I have tried to strengthen my pysical condition and health. Most employee of aeronautical industry work shift. It require them to have a good stamina. It’s easy to get tired. Therefore, I have exercised for an hour 4times a week. I usually work out at a gym nearby. Additionally, I try to avoid having fast foods and too much sugars.

 

At last, I got certificates related to the area. The industry area require applicants to have a specific certificates such as aviaition licenses, English Proficiency skills, medical certificate and so on. I almost got them except for a English proficiency skill. You know what I mean?

 

Overall, I’m doing my best to get a job for the aeronatical company,

 


4. Describe a product or service that didn't meet your expectations in an industry or company you were interested in. 

 

When I heard of your question, It brings me to the day I take an airplane at the airport. Let me share about the day.

 

Like I said earlier, I want to work for the company in aeronautical industries. Besides, I like taking on an airplane when I go somewhere. Anyway, One day, I go on a trip for Pohang in Korea to meet up with one of my friends living in Pohang. So I decided to take an airplane.

 

But I got in a trouble to abroad the airplane. The time of take off got delayed over and over. I got upset with it. I didn't know what happened there. The staffs at the counter just said we would let you explain when we figured it out. I was getting uncomfortable.

 

Eventually, the airline employee at the check in counter gave me a hand for this trouble. She helped me book another ticket instead. Even though it was 2 hours delayed ticket, It didn’t matter at all. I ended up taking on an airplane.

 

I had an bad service at the airport, I think they do their best to explain about a delayed take off. It frustrated me. 


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