I think it's good to exercise through equipment in the gym.

because I get more interested in exercise,exercising, and I can build muscles

in a more systematic way.

one more time.

I think it's good to exercise through with equipment in the gym.

because I get more interested in exercising, and I can build muscles in a more systematic way.

-> ex) I’ve been exercising in the gym for the past six months and working with different equipment really helped me engage in exercising. I have a personal trainer that helps me with my work out, and he has taught me how to properly use the equipment without getting hurt, and how to effectively use my muscles. I can see the difference, and it feels good to stay healthy and fit.

so, with my experience, I believe it is better to exercise in a gym.

-> 답을 한 번만 하셔도 됩니다.

-> 답변시간이 1분 주어지는 만큼 구체적인 예시나 본인 경험을 추가하는 등 시간을 채워서 풍부한 답변이 된다면 보다 고득점을 받으실거라 생각됩니다.