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Lucas
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조회 112
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- 2022.08.08
Unit 5. 사는 곳
좋아하는 방 설명하기 - 장소
Q : Please tell me about your house. What's your favorite room? What does it look like? Why do you like room?
A : I live on the thirtyth floor of an apartment complex. My apartment ios quite cozy, and I like living in it very much. I've got a kitchen, a living room, two bathrooms and three bedrooms. Of thoes the room, I like the most is a living room., which is locasted in the center of the apartment.
Our living room is most large room of house, and it has a space at the corner for only me. I usually spend a time this pace as playing a computer games, reading a books, and studying. It's nice to look out over outside because it's locasted next to the big window in the living room.
Since the space is in the living room, I can't spend time alone, but it's good to see the activities of the whole family at a glance while having my time.
과거와 현재의 집 비교하기
Q : Compare the home you lived in before to the one you live in now. What are the differences between those two homes? Provide me with as many as possible.
A : Until five years ago, I lived in a small and old two bedroom apartmant next to a downtown of Seoul with my family. It was the third place where my family and I lived in. It was very different from where I live now.
Back then, It was two small for four people in my family because it had two bedroom and a really small kitchen. It was a house that was nearly fourty years old and has been not reparied. So the all facilities were old and inconvenient to use.
I contrast, my current home is a middle-size, new, three-bedroom aprartment in a big complex. Every room has large windows that let in lots of sunlight. All facilities in the hose are new, so it is convenient to use. Expecially, Large green spaces, trails, and playgrounds surround the complex like a park, so my family often use it.
집에서 겪은 문제 해결 경험 말하기
Q : Have you ever had any problem with your home? What was the problem and how did you deal with it? How did the problem turn out?
A : A big problem I had with my apartment was a having a mold infestation. Two years ago, I found the mold at the corner of bethroom. Until then, cleaning the bethroom was my wife's role and she had a lack stamina to clean it so it wouldn't get moldy.
I bought a handbrush, cleanning detergent, and tile supplements right away. I applied detergent and used a handbrush to remove all the mold. The cement between the tiles also fell off little by little, so I filled them with tile supplements. I cleanned the bathroom every Sunday during 2 hour for about a month.
Our bathroom is much cleaner than before, but we need to pay attention to mold. So after that time, cleanning bathroom is became a my role. I realized from that experience that housework should also be distributed according to each individual talents.
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