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- 2020.08.13
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My name is Sang Min Park but you can just call me Sang Min. Im 26 years old. I live in a house in Gumi, Gyeongsang-buk-do with my family.
These days im looking for a job in the field of engineering. I’d like to work in this field because my major was mechanical engineering in university.
In my free time, I play computer games or watch movies. I like these activities because they let me kick back and relax.
As for my personality, I tend to be a bit extroverted. I have a larege circle of friends and love to make a new friends.
I’d really like to work for a big engineering firm. Now that my university education is finished, im looking forward to starting my own career.
(사는 곳)
1 집의 모습 묘사
I live in a three-bedroom apartment, and it is on the 5th floor of a 16-story apartment building in Gumi city.
The first thing to see when you step into my house is the entrance area. As you pass the hallway, on the left there is a kitchen area and a study room. On the right is a living room. Next to the living room, you can see the master bedroom and my bedroom.
The space I like the most in my home has got to be my bedroom and there are several reasons for my preference. To start with, my bedroom is just for me and its the place where i can spend time all by myself without any distractions. Whats more, my room has a fantastic view of the mountain. So whenever i need time to collect my thoughts, I look out the window and enjoy the view.
i know that my house is not that luxurious or fancy but its a perfect fit for me!
2 좋아하는 방
I live on the fifth floor of an apartment complex. My apartment is quite cozy, and i like living in it very much.
I’ve got a kitchen, a living room, and a bedroom. Of those, the room i like the most is my bedroom, which is located in the rear of the apartment.
My bedroom is not a very large room, but its my safe haven. Its got a thick beige rug on the floor and a comfortable bed.
However, what sets this room apart from the others is that the window looks out over the mountain behind my apartment building. Whenever i open it, i can get some fresh air, which helps clear my thoughts.
The only complaint i have is that the room needs some new furniture. I may put in a new bookshelf and a comfortable chair to read in.
3 과거와 현재의 집 비교
When i was young, i lived in a spacious apartment in a suburb of Gumi with my family. It was the place where i grew up, and it was very different from where i live now.
Back then, i lived in a large, two-bedroom apartment in a quiet neighborhood. The interior of the house created a stately atmosphere. And there was a park nearby, and we’d go jogging on the weekends.
In contrast, my current home is a small apartment. Since the place is very small, it has a cozy atmosphere. It doesnt have many windows. And there is no balcony, so i have to leave the building to get fresh air if it gets stuffy.
On the plus side, my home is conveniently located near many good restaurants and cafe. There are many amenities within walking distance. Also, living in the city makes it easier to have a social life.
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