I think this picture was taken in an office. There are four people in this picture.

In the middle of the picture, a man is looking at some paper papers.

He has short hair and he is wearing a gray suit.

Next to him, a woman is holding a cup of coffee. She has brown hair and is wearing a black suit.

They are standing in front of the copy machine. In the back, I see two other people standing in the hallway. On the left side of the picture, there are empty rooms with glass windows. I see some tables and lap tops. 등등

-> 잘하시고 문법 실수도 거의 없으나, 인물 묘사에만 치우친 면이 있습니다.

사물묘사, 배경 묘사를 좀 더 구체적으로 하시면 보다 높은 점수를 받으실 수 있습니다.