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- 2023.01.25
1. Tell me about one industry in your
country that is well known
When I heard think of your question. Aeronautical industry comes up to me first.
I’m interested in the area because I want to work for the industry one day. So,
I’ll explain about it.
First of all, Aeronautical industry is one
of the fastest growing industries in my country. According to some news, Aeronautical
industry has a very promising future because of the geopolitical location of
Korea. People around the world will travel to other countries through the
Korea located in the middle of the Asia. That’s why a bunch of Airlines have
opened these days. You know what? It only takes less than 2 hours to get to
Japan or China from Korea by airplane.
Second, The average salary of Aeronautical
industry is higher than other industries. Because of that, Many people of
in Korea started to be interested in the area.
Unfortunately, Covid-19 made the industry get worse struggle for a while. The industry has recovered from
the Covid-19 quickly. Furthermore, UAM(Urban Air Mobility) has a great
influence on the aeronautical industry. I believe that our life will have
changed change greatly thanks to the
industry.
Overall, Aeronautical industry has a great
future and many people want to work for the area in this field/area these days.
2. Can you tell me about an industry that
you follow? how has it changed since then?
Like I mentioned, Aeronautical industry is
the promising area and many people want to work for in the this area.
Moreover, there are many changes compared to the past. Let me tell you about
it.
In the past, There were few airlines in
Korea. In other words, There were only 2 airlines, Korea Airline, and Asiana Airline. What’s worse, The average price of the airplane
ticket was so expensive. Nevertheless, We had no choice but to take these
airlines due to the reason. That’s why most people preferred a domestic
travel to a overseas travel, back then.
But now, According to the development of
Aeronautical industry, Bunch of Airlines has opened and there are twelve
airlines now. In other words, We have a lot of choices with reasonable prices
of airplane ticket. Moreover, I can easily make a reservation on a phone ahead
of time comparing different airlines in real time. If I want to have a meal in
Japan for my free time, I could just book an
airplane ticket using my apps.
All in all, Many airlines have run compared
to the past. It can lead us to get a ticket at a reasonable price and to use
easily through the apps on a phone.
3. What kind of efforts have you made for
your career in the past?
Like I mentioned earlier, I want to work
for the aeronautical industry one day. And I do various efforts for my goal.
Let me share the things that I try to do
First, I have studied I’m studying for English hard. Because having
a good English proficiency skill is pretty important to communicate each
other as a global language. Given the characteristics of aeronautical
industry, I would work with many workers from other countries. It means that I
would make a trouble if i miscommunicate with co-workers. That’s why I’m getting
a studying for this Opic Test
Second, I have tried try to strengthen my physical condition and health.
Most employee of aeronautical industry work shift. It require requires them to have a good stamina. It’s easy to get
tired. Therefore, I have exercised exercise
for an hour 4times a week. I usually work out at a gym nearby. Additionally, I
try to avoid having fast foods and too much sugar.
At last, I got certificates related to the
area. The industry area require requires
applicants to have a specific certificate such as aviation licenses, English
Proficiency skills, medical certificate and so on. I almost got all of them except for a the English proficiency skill. You know what I mean?
Overall, I’m doing my best to get a job for
the aeronautical company,
4. Describe a product or service that
didn't meet your expectations in an industry or company you were interested in.
When I heard of your question, It brings me
to the day I take took an airplane at the
airport. Let me share about the day.
Like I said earlier, I want to work for the
a company in the
aeronautical industry. Besides, I like taking on an the airplane when I go somewhere. Anyway, One day, I go
went on a trip for Pohang in Korea to meet
up with one of my friends living in Pohang. So I decided to take an
airplane.
But I got in a trouble to abroad had trouble boarding on the airplane. The time of takeoff
got delayed over and over. I got upset with it. I didn't know what happened
there. The staffs at the counter just said we would let you explain when
we figured it out. I was getting uncomfortable.
Eventually, the airline employee at the
check in counter gave me a hand for this trouble. She helped me book another
ticket instead. Even though it was 2 hours delayed ticket 2hours later, It didn’t matter at all. I ended up taking
on an airplane buying the ticket.
I had an a
bad service at the airport, I think they should do
their best to explain about a delayed take off. It frustrated me.
항시 감사합니다^^ 새해 복 많이 받으세요 선생님
번호 | 제목 | 글쓴이 | 조회수 | 날짜 |
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>> | [OPIc] RE:Industry 첨삭 부탁드립니다 | 첨삭지기 | 89 | 2023.01.25 |
6130 | [OPIc] 첨삭 요청 드려요~~~ | DH | 78 | 2023.01.25 |
6129 | [OPIc] RE:첨삭 요청 드려요~~~ | 첨삭지기 | 82 | 2023.01.25 |
6128 | [OPIc] 첨삭 부탁드립니다!! | DH | 89 | 2023.01.25 |
6127 | [OPIc] RE:첨삭 부탁드립니다!! | 첨삭지기 | 88 | 2023.01.25 |
6126 | [OPIc] 첨삭 부탁드려요~ | EE | 76 | 2023.01.25 |
6125 | [OPIc] RE:첨삭 부탁드려요~ | 첨삭지기 | 93 | 2023.01.25 |
6124 | [OPIc] 첨삭 요청 드립니다 | EE | 99 | 2023.01.25 |
6123 | [OPIc] RE:첨삭 요청 드립니다 | 첨삭지기 | 79 | 2023.01.25 |
6122 | [OPIc] Geography 첨삭 부탁드립니다. | 오픽언제탈출해 | 86 | 2023.01.24 |
6121 | [OPIc] RE:Geography 첨삭 부탁드립니다. | 첨삭지기 | 81 | 2023.01.24 |
6120 | [OPIc] 좋아하는 영화 첨삭 부탁드립니다. | Riley | 91 | 2023.01.21 |
6119 | [OPIc] RE:좋아하는 영화 첨삭 부탁드립니다. | 첨삭지기 | 95 | 2023.01.21 |
6118 | [OPIc] 가장 좋아하는 방 첨삭 부탁드립니다. | Riley | 87 | 2023.01.21 |
6117 | [OPIc] RE:가장 좋아하는 방 첨삭 부탁드립니다. | 첨삭지기 | 88 | 2023.01.21 |
6116 | [OPIc] Transportations 첨삭 부탁드립니다 | 오픽언제탈출해 | 101 | 2023.01.18 |
6115 | [OPIc] RE:Transportations 첨삭 부탁드립니다 | 첨삭지기 | 84 | 2023.01.18 |
6114 | [OPIc] 첨삭 요청 드려요 | 지니 | 91 | 2023.01.18 |
6113 | [OPIc] RE:첨삭 요청 드려요 | 첨삭지기 | 89 | 2023.01.18 |
6112 | [OPIc] 첨삭 부탁드립니다 :) | Liz | 100 | 2023.01.18 |
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