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RE:Industry 첨삭 부탁드립니다

첨삭지기 | 조회 89 | 추천 1
  • 2023.01.25
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1. Tell me about one industry in your country that is well known

When I heard think of your question. Aeronautical industry comes up to me first. I’m interested in the area because I want to work for the industry one day. So, I’ll explain about it.

First of all, Aeronautical industry is one of the fastest growing industries in my country. According to some news, Aeronautical industry has a very promising future because of the geopolitical location of Korea. People around the world will travel to other countries through the Korea located in the middle of the Asia. That’s why a bunch of Airlines have opened these days. You know what? It only takes less than 2 hours to get to Japan or China from Korea by airplane.

Second, The average salary of Aeronautical industry is higher than other industries. Because of that, Many people of in Korea started to be interested in the area. Unfortunately, Covid-19 made the industry get worse struggle for a while. The industry has recovered from the Covid-19 quickly. Furthermore, UAM(Urban Air Mobility) has a great influence on the aeronautical industry. I believe that our life will have changed change greatly thanks to the industry.

Overall, Aeronautical industry has a great future and many people want to work for the area in this field/area these days.

 

2. Can you tell me about an industry that you follow? how has it changed since then?

Like I mentioned, Aeronautical industry is the promising area and many people want to work for in the this area. Moreover, there are many changes compared to the past. Let me tell you about it.

In the past, There were few airlines in Korea. In other words, There were only 2 airlines, Korea Airline, and Asiana Airline. What’s worse, The average price of the airplane ticket was so expensive. Nevertheless, We had no choice but to take these airlines due to the reason. That’s why most people preferred a domestic travel to a overseas travel, back then.

But now, According to the development of Aeronautical industry, Bunch of Airlines has opened and there are twelve airlines now. In other words, We have a lot of choices with reasonable prices of airplane ticket. Moreover, I can easily make a reservation on a phone ahead of time comparing different airlines in real time. If I want to have a meal in Japan for my free time, I could just book an airplane ticket using my apps.

All in all, Many airlines have run compared to the past. It can lead us to get a ticket at a reasonable price and to use easily through the apps on a phone.

 

 

3. What kind of efforts have you made for your career in the past?

Like I mentioned earlier, I want to work for the aeronautical industry one day. And I do various efforts for my goal. Let me share the things that I try to do

First, I have studied I’m studying for English hard. Because having a good English proficiency skill is pretty important to communicate each other as a global language. Given the characteristics of aeronautical industry, I would work with many workers from other countries. It means that I would make a trouble if i miscommunicate with co-workers. That’s why I’m getting a studying for this Opic Test

Second, I have tried try to strengthen my physical condition and health. Most employee of aeronautical industry work shift. It require requires them to have a good stamina. It’s easy to get tired. Therefore, I have exercised exercise for an hour 4times a week. I usually work out at a gym nearby. Additionally, I try to avoid having fast foods and too much sugar.

At last, I got certificates related to the area. The industry area require requires applicants to have a specific certificate such as aviation licenses, English Proficiency skills, medical certificate and so on. I almost got all of them except for a the English proficiency skill. You know what I mean?

Overall, I’m doing my best to get a job for the aeronautical company,

 

4. Describe a product or service that didn't meet your expectations in an industry or company you were interested in.

When I heard of your question, It brings me to the day I take took an airplane at the airport. Let me share about the day.

Like I said earlier, I want to work for the a company in the aeronautical industry. Besides, I like taking on an the airplane when I go somewhere. Anyway, One day, I go went on a trip for Pohang in Korea to meet up with one of my friends living in Pohang. So I decided to take an airplane.

But I got in a trouble to abroad had trouble boarding on the airplane. The time of takeoff got delayed over and over. I got upset with it. I didn't know what happened there. The staffs at the counter just said we would let you explain when we figured it out. I was getting uncomfortable.

Eventually, the airline employee at the check in counter gave me a hand for this trouble. She helped me book another ticket instead. Even though it was 2 hours delayed ticket 2hours later, It didn’t matter at all. I ended up taking on an airplane buying the ticket.

 I had an a bad service at the airport, I think they should do their best to explain about a delayed take off. It frustrated me.

 

 

 

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