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RE:첨삭 부탁드려요~!

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  • 2021.07.29
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1. Do you know Ed sheeran? I love Ed Sheeran, who is a famous singer in the world. He has the voice of an angel. As for his music,  his lyrics are really emotional, they touched my heart so much. 
His songs can make the atmosphere so romantic.  
If you listen to his voice once, you'll fall in love with him, you know. 

2. As I alreay told you before, I'm a big fan of ed sheeran.
In 2019, ed sheeran came to the Korea and held the concert. Umm.. I went to this concert with my friend. The concert was held in the park located in Incheon. You know, the competition of ticketing was intense. 
But luckily, I caught it.
 When I arrived at a concert hall, there was no place to step. That is, there were so many people. I bought some snacks such as sandwich and coke. The performance was started at 6'o clock. Umm. I was very touching because his voice was so gorgeous.  
I was like, " Wow!!!!! What a completely beautiful voice ever!"
 Umm, It was very great time and I think he is a fabulous singer in the world.
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>> 답글 [OPIc] RE:첨삭 부탁드려요~! 첨삭지기 124 2021.07.29
3231 [OPIc] 첨삭 부탁드립니다 ! 옹픽 101 2021.07.29
3230 답글 [OPIc] RE:첨삭 부탁드립니다 ! 첨삭지기 110 2021.07.29
3229 [스피킹] 파트 6 kmj8878 111 2021.07.29
3228 답글 [스피킹] RE:파트 6 첨삭지기 113 2021.07.29
3227 [OPIc] 첨삭부탁드립니다. 오픽지기 111 2021.07.28
3226 답글 [OPIc] RE:첨삭부탁드립니다. 첨삭지기 108 2021.07.28
3225 [OPIc] 첨삭 부탁드립니다!! 연두사과 112 2021.07.28
3224 답글 [OPIc] RE:첨삭 부탁드립니다!! 첨삭지기 114 2021.07.28
3223 [OPIc] 첨삭 부탁드립니다! 연두사과 108 2021.07.28
3222 답글 [OPIc] RE:첨삭 부탁드립니다! 첨삭지기 124 2021.07.28
3221 [OPIc] 첨삭부탁드립니다 !!! 오르피크 112 2021.07.28
3220 [OPIc] 첨삭부탁드립니다!!! 오픽완성 114 2021.07.28
3219 답글 [OPIc] RE:첨삭부탁드립니다!!! 첨삭지기 105 2021.07.28
3218 답글 [OPIc] RE:첨삭 부탁드립니다 ! 첨삭지기 110 2021.07.28
3217 [OPIc] 첨삭 부탁 드립니다 애지중지포도청 115 2021.07.27
3216 답글 [OPIc] RE:첨삭 부탁 드립니다 첨삭지기 111 2021.07.27
3215 [OPIc] 첨삭 요청합니다~~ 애지중지포도청 106 2021.07.27
3214 답글 [OPIc] RE:첨삭 요청합니다~~ 첨삭지기 119 2021.07.27
3213 [OPIc] 첨삭 부탁드립니다 이뻐쑥라떼 105 2021.07.27

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