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- 2020.09.02
Hi my name is jejune song i'm 24
i'm a university student and mycurrently current major is mechanical engineering.
this is always attractive subject for me so i never regret selecting this major.
but sometimes studying my classes is so challenging, because it is hard to understand.
as for my personality simply i tend to bea optimistic.
i think negative thoughts are useless alsoit they-> negative thoughts를 받는것이니 makes me feel gloomy.
my hobby these days includes walking.
It is a great way to refresh my complex mind
moreover it can give me time to collect my thoughts.
so i go outside whenever i need to think for myself
In the future, i hope to be a mechanical engineer
In order to get my job, I muststack my value improve my resume
i'm a university student and my
this is always attractive subject for me so i never regret selecting this major.
but sometimes studying my classes is so challenging, because it is hard to understand.
as for my personality simply i tend to be
i think negative thoughts are useless also
my hobby these days includes walking.
It is a great way to refresh my complex mind
moreover it can give me time to collect my thoughts.
so i go outside whenever i need to think for myself
In the future, i hope to be a mechanical engineer
In order to get my job, I must
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