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첨삭지기 | 조회 379 | 추천 1
  • 2020.08.11
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자기소개

My name is kim, and i am in my mid-twenties.
I live with my family in an apartment of Gwangyang.
There are four people in my family my father, my mother, my sister and me.
These days i’m looking for a job as an electrician. I’d like to work in this field because i studied electricity in university.
In my free time, i play computer games or watch movies.
I like these active, activities because they let me kick back and relax.
As for my personality, i tend to be outgoing. I have a large circle of friends and love to make new friends.
I’d really like to work for a public corporation. Now that my university education is finished, i’m looking forward to starting my career.

현재의 집과 과거의 집 비교

When I was young, I lived in a small apartment complex.

It was the place where I grew up, and it was very different from the where I live now. Back then, I lived in a small, two-bedroom apartment in a quiet neighborhood. The interior of the house created a cozy atmosphere. Oh, and there was a park nearby, and we’d go jogging on the weekends.

 In contrast, my current home is a large apartment and has three-bedroom. Since the place is a large, it has active atmosphere. On the plus side, my home is conveniently located near many good restaurants and cafes.

Also, living in my current house makes it easier to hang out with my friends.


기억에 남는 영화

The title of the most memorable movie I have ever seen is “twenty”. I watched it for the first time 2years ago When it was shown on TV. To cut a long story short, the movie is about a love story of between man and woman.  

What’s more, this movie starred in “Kim OuBin” and “Lee Yoo-bi”, This movie was unforgettable for me because the actor "Lee Yoo-bi" appears so beautifully. After watching the movie, "Lee Yoo-bi" became one of my favorite actors.actresses


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