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- 2021.04.23
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Q3. 두 노부부가 정원에서 꽃을 심고 있는 사진
There are two people in the picture. They are kneeling down... they are kneeling on the grass. And It seem they seem like a couple.
It seems to that ->다음에 문장이기 때문에 they are planting some flowers on the vase. There’s a huge mountain behind them. And it seems very peaceful place, and the two people seem quite old. Yeah.
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Q4. 동네에서 좋아하는 식당과 위치
Ok. My favorite restaurant is located just right in the center of the town.
It’s Italian. It’s very good.
Q5. 가장 좋아하는 메뉴
They sell tomato pastas and pizza, but my favorite one is the tomato pasta. It’s really good. Tomatoes seems seem fresh.
Q6. 동네 외 식당들도 자주 가는 지와 그 이유
I usually go.. I often go to a restaurant outside of this neighborhood.
Because I like going out a variety of places and other than the neighborhood here.
So yeah ,I like going out as many places as possible. That’s why.
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Q7. 부동산 세미나 일정표
So um the seminar last lasts for three days and you can register on Jan 2.
Q8. 부동산 세미나 일정표
It lasts for three days and it start starts at 9:30 am
And finishes at 2pm uh 2:30 pm
Q9. 부동산 세미나 일정표
The lecture about Interest rates would be on Tuesday.
And it will start at 11… oh 12pm ends at 1:30 by a lecturer.
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Q10. 병원에서 소지품 분실이 빈번하게 발생하는 것에 따른 해결책 제시
I’ve got a suggestion. How about installing a CCTV surveillance camera -> CCTV가 틀린건 아니지만 이 표현이 자연스러울듯 합니다 in the hospital by monitoring in order to monitor 24 hours a day.
Sorry, so the problem is that people lose their personal belongings. And it seems like the visitors are taking their stuff away and my suggestion is to install a CCTV and so that we can monitor people for 24 hours a day. Also posting to post -> 앞의 문장 my suggestion is to intall과 연결되기 때문a notice that CCTV installation and its being monitored is installed and you will be monitored. That way, people cannot take other people’s belongings so easily.
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Q11. 야외에서 운동하는 것을 선호하는지 헬스장에서 운동하는 것을 선호하는지
Um so I think it's way better to excise outdoors for those following reasons.
First, we could feel the fresh air while you are exercising. Getting fresh air in for your lung helps you release stress. And helps you feel much better than indoor.
My second reason is that a lot of researches being gone showing show that when we see a plants and some greenary scenaries scenary, we get much more productive and creative energy ->productive 와 creative가 꾸며주는 대상이 없음. So in order to be creative, it’s better to exercise outdoor.
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